Comments on: Perfect Fit: Poem http://storylet.org/original-poetry-art/perfect-fit-poem/ A walk with a few of my characters as they tell me their stories Sat, 28 Jan 2012 04:08:25 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: marcia morris http://storylet.org/original-poetry-art/perfect-fit-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-672 marcia morris Sat, 23 Jan 2010 22:02:04 +0000 http://storylet.org/?p=2754#comment-672 And then … the next moment comes Intoxicating … he loves her even more With urgency, he pulls her close to him He knows he has to feel her against him The sensation … electric The fit … perfect You started out good and even better when these lines followed. Great! a very romantic piece. Thanks for sharing. And then … the next moment comes
Intoxicating … he loves her even more

With urgency, he pulls her close to him
He knows he has to feel her against him

The sensation … electric
The fit … perfect

You started out good and even better when these lines followed.
Great! a very romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

]]> By: Mike Evans http://storylet.org/original-poetry-art/perfect-fit-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-666 Mike Evans Fri, 22 Jan 2010 23:16:14 +0000 http://storylet.org/?p=2754#comment-666 Thank you Leslie :-) Thank you Leslie :-)

]]> By: Leslie Moon http://storylet.org/original-poetry-art/perfect-fit-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-637 Leslie Moon Fri, 22 Jan 2010 02:01:04 +0000 http://storylet.org/?p=2754#comment-637 painting and poem - a perfect fit!! Mike- Really love the flow painting and poem – a perfect fit!!
Mike- Really love the flow

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