• Sunday, January 17th, 2010
Perfect Fit
With a single look, she takes his breath away
She simply smiles, “I’m just a normal flawed girl”
Momentarily stunned, he breathes in her beauty
Completely captivated … under her spell
He thinks he couldn’t possibly love her more
Than he does – right now – this very moment
And then … the next moment comes
Intoxicating … he loves her even more
With urgency, he pulls her close to him
He knows he has to feel her against him
The sensation … electric
The fit … perfect
Artist: Christine Comyn; Poet: Mike Evans
Category: Perfect Fit
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painting and poem – a perfect fit!!
Mike- Really love the flow
Thank you Leslie :-)
And then … the next moment comes
Intoxicating … he loves her even more
With urgency, he pulls her close to him
He knows he has to feel her against him
The sensation … electric
The fit … perfect
You started out good and even better when these lines followed.
Great! a very romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.